This week in media we had to do a presentation to the rest of the class. In the presentation we was presenting our post 16 magazine front cover and contents page. Where I had to talk about why I used the style that I did, why did I use the colours that I did. Then the rest of the group had to give me feedback on how they think it went, what was good about my magazine design and what could be improved.
Feedback:
What went well?
- Good use of colour- use the Harris Academy Beckenham colours (red,blue)
- front page set out well. Also the contents page
- An attractive front cover and contents page
- Use the same colour for front cover and contents
- The front cover theme match's contents page
What could be improved?
- The text used is not big enough on the front page. Increase the size
- Use more key words and talk about what I learnt from my research
- Made the text more clearer and larger
- Make the sell point the main focus and stand out from other subheadings
I think that the feedback that I was given by my class mates was helpful, as they noticed the areas where I went wrong and the way I could improve it ,for an example they talked about the size of the font that I used and next time I should make the font bigger and more clearer, they said the ways I could do this is by printing the front cover out to see what It would look like close up as a magazine with this help I will take into account the feedback when im doing my next task. I think next time when I have to start making my music magazine, I have to do more reasearch before hand and spot out the key aspects that magazines use to drew in their target audience with this help I could make my magazine look even more professional. I also feel in my Christmas holiday I should do reasearch on the computer or even reading a magazine and just get the main details that the magazine uses.
But what are you actually going to improve? What do you need to do to ensure your main task is successful?
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